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Well, they're not exactly denied the right to marriage. I know. She was referring to "social" laws--prejudice etc... Then she should've said that. That's true. It turned into a completely ...

Hi! I'm Jacquie. I'm self-perfectionistic, and also here to review. I'm now learning what I don't like about my own writing, which is nice. Now I can get back to ...

I wear contacts. Would you like me to eat you?

Where did that question come from?!

Some say it's not a color at all--it's the absense of colors. How would you describe a zebra's stripes?

I think Nikki's real question was "what laws should be broken?", or "what is your opinion on gay marriage?" Rules are meant to be defied. Many people are by nature ...

Red with orange-yellow seeds. What color is the center of an apple?

Can someone fill me in?

Great job--after the intro, you really brought me into the story. It was beautifully written, from the heart. A few suggestions: 1. you could do more editing (I'm not doing ...

If it is today, tomorrow it won't be. Are you happy?

First of all, there is more than one way to revise your piece, not just Nox's suggestions. Don't take her examples word for word; else, it will be her writing, ...

It just makes it harder to read. This should also probably be under Science Fiction.

Melodie, do you mean immortality on earth? Then, no, I wouldn't. This has something to do with the rewind thing, but, what if you could live your life over and ...

Fontroy never uses punctuation...I've only seen it once, when he commented on something he really liked. :wink: I'm not sure I want to join this heated debate. I've been following ...

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